S.S. Rose

Hello Francis Michael Buck, I loved your poem. It was frightening and real and relevant. Very, very nice. In my mind, the Fox was death, chasing me with bared, bloody ...

He sees her guilt: The crease of crinkled wretched eyes The wet folding palms like drowning lilies Fetid past clutched in a choking throat He sees the tears: Unwanted guests ...

Hello Daydreams, This piece is pretty good, but I noticed a lot of similarities to Scott Westerfeld's Uglies series. It also kind of reminded me of the Matrix somewhat. You ...

Hello Conrad Rice, So this was a nice little piece of writing. Thanks for posting it. Yes, I enjoyed it, but I think you might have gone a bit deeper. ...

Empressoftheuniverse - I just wanted to clear something up: And bring this temple down with ease In this line, it is implied that the body itself is a temple, devastated ...

Hello cjscoot. Nice to get a taste of your prose. All in all, pretty good. It got my attention. Would I by it from B&N? Probably not. Not if this ...

I am a bit dissatisfied with this piece. It seems to be just like every other melodramatic love poem that I have ever read in my life. I like the ...

Water like a drop of fire Hot and bright and keen like fire Floating down and scorching snow Looking down, can’t let this go Pain skin-deep and ache within Drowning ...

Interesting, and quite well done. A few grammar errors: too blind to face their problems and take responsibility for our actions. Change their to our if you're going to talk ...

On a lonesome night, Wintry, crisp, remote; Tumbled notes of faith From an inky cloak. As the frost-buds dropped On the slumb'ring loam, All the stars were hidden In their ...

'Ello there. So...nice job, overall. I have a few issues to discuss, though. Left to clean up the mess That you left me in I'm not sure if you repeated ...

Hmm...interesting. I liked, as your other commentators noted, the originality of the idea, but I also thought the rhyming was forced. When you write poetry, you should rhyme to write, ...

Hmm...I like it. All in all, it's a good job. This piece is quite "organic"....not presumptious in the slightest. You've gotten across the gist of what's going on in the ...

Hello fellow scribblers! My "name" is S.S. Rose. I'm a wannabe poet and writer of prose, but my greatest struggle as of yet is writing with life. Writing in such ...

Hello, karribeandiva. :) Honestly, join the club. Every writer loves and criticizes their own work more than anyone else does. It's called egoism and the only thing we can do ...